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Points about Pacing: Tips and Techniques for Timing
by, Jill Swenson
April 19, 2016

When you write a book length manuscript you need to keep the story moving forward. Every scene, every sentence, every word should serve to advance the storyline. When editors talk about “pacing,” they refer to the narrator’s ability to keep the reader turning the page. Have you ever heard someone tell a joke that went on for so long by the time the punch line… [Read More]

Filed Under: composition, dialgoue, flashback, foreshadow, pacing, Punctuation, rhythm, tempo, varied sentence length
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How To Accept Criticism Even When It’s Not Constructive
by, Jill Swenson
February 23, 2016

You have polished a piece of your writing and are ready for someone else to read it. You take an enormous risk when you ask someone else for feedback. You make yourself vulnerable to being misunderstood or worse. It’s more than words on a piece of paper which stand in judgment. It’s you—your soul—on the line. Every red pen mark on the page feels like… [Read More]

Filed Under: criticism, Edith Wharton, Ernest Hemingway, feedback, Harper Lee, inner critic, Max Perkins, self-esteem, Tay Hohoff
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Finding your story structure
by, Jill Swenson
February 2, 2016

Pantser or plotter? Do you write by the seat of the pants or from an outline? You need to do both. Here’s why. The process of writing a book manuscript requires both kinds of writing. Intense periods of writing uninterrupted in a generative flow experience and critical reflection on the narration as narrative. After some time and distance between you and your copy has passed,… [Read More]

Filed Under: Aristotlean arc, Character Sketches, meta-writing, narrative structure, question anaysis, story map, Storyboarding, Thematic Analysis, timelines, world building
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Daydreaming for Authors
by, Sharon K. Yntema
December 15, 2015

When I was a teenager, I was a little hurt when my mother commented that I was a daydreamer, as in “just a daydreamer.” Apparently I spent more time than my siblings sitting and staring off into space. If I were Catholic, I would carry a bit of guilt for daydreaming, but my mother gave me Buddhism, from which I learned that reflecting on things… [Read More]

Filed Under: creativity, daydream, writer's block, writer's fatigue, writer's toolbox
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Is an Online Writing Class Right for You?
by, Jill Swenson
September 22, 2015

Joyce Maynard found ads for James Patterson Master Class in her Facebook newsfeed and signed up to discover the secrets to writing a bestselling book. She wrote an article for The Observer about what Patterson had to teach her about writing – and selling – books. That she herself was a published author of a couple memoirs and a dozen novels did not prevent her… [Read More]

Filed Under: Gotham Writers, James Patterson, Joyce Maynard, Loft LIterary Center, MediaBistro, Writer's Digest University
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How to Turn a Good Book into a Great One
by, Jill Swenson
September 15, 2015

The July publication of Go Set a Watchman revealed Harper Lee changed point of view when she rewrote it as To Kill a Mockingbird. The new book is an unedited version and shows Harper Lee sloppily slip-sliding between first-person and third. The difference between a story narrated by Jean Louise Finch, a 26-year-old daughter, about her disillusionment in Atticus and small town bigotry, and the… [Read More]

Filed Under: Harper Lee, Laura Ingalls Wilder, Pioneer Girl, Rose Wilder Lane, third-person limited, third-person objective, third-person omniscient, To Kill a Mockingbird
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Six Myths About Copyright Permissions
by, Jill Swenson
August 25, 2015

Myth #1: “Fair Use under the US Copyright Law covers this.” It does not. “Fair Use” pertains to educational use only; not for profit. Publishing, however, has a commercial intent and therefore authors are not excused from seeking copyright permission for work that is not original. This includes photographs, poems, song lyrics, artwork, or an excerpt from another book or publication. Myth #2: “It must… [Read More]

Filed Under: copyright permissions, Fair Use, public domain, US Copyright Law
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Dealing With Rejection
by, Jenna Goodman
July 21, 2015

Let’s skip the stories about famous books that were rejected thirty, forty, or fifty-seven times before getting published and becoming well-loved classics. And forget about Stephen King’s nail on the wall that became so heavy with rejections it pulled loose from the wood. Intellectually, we all know rejection is a part of the game, but emotionally… well, emotionally, it’s a different story. So how can… [Read More]

Filed Under: constructive criticism, feedback, On Writing, Rejections, Stephen King
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Literary Medic
by, Jill Swenson
July 14, 2015

The hardest part of my job as a book development editor is delivering bad news to a writer. An agent is not interested in offering you representation. An acquisition editor decides to pass after reading your proposal and sample chapters. You failed to make necessary editorial revisions. Rejection is a hard message to deliver. And it happens to be a task I do more often… [Read More]

Filed Under: book doctor, diagnostic, literary medic, prescriptive, writing medicine
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Behavioral Engineering for Writers
by, Jenna Goodman
June 2, 2015

If there were some easy ways to be more productive as a writer, would you want to know about them? If so, read on. “I write only when inspiration strikes. Fortunately it strikes every morning at nine o’clock sharp.” —W. Somerset Maugham In the above quote, Maugham is getting at one of the critical distinctions between professional working writers and, well, everyone else (which here… [Read More]

Filed Under: conditioning, editing, hacks, Reading, rewriting, typing, writing
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